tigerswiftly wrote:So, yup. It's available for free now. http://www.shimmerzine.com/the-mothgate-by-j-r-troughton/ Had some nice feedback and it's awesome to see certain quotes from the text done all well good and that. Would anyone be interested in setting up a regular writing group? I don't have any real friends who like writing... share feedback, etc? Might be a nice way for us all to get better... if anyone else is still writing.
tigerswiftly wrote:I don't have any real friends who like writing...
tigerswiftly wrote:Re: writing group. Suggestions? Perhaps someone puts up 1000-2000 words ever two weeks and everyone feeds back what they like and what they didn't? Not suggesting how to fix, but suggestions about what might need fixing? If there are 4-5 people, that means only submitting every 2 months or whatever, but it's probably best to make it as manageable as possible? Thoughts...?
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Tempy wrote:Yeah that's all fair, it's very much a first draft of an idea rather than anything finished, I'm very bad at honing before posting, so it was just written this morning. I'll have at it again now I know it wasn't a wasted hour or so.
dynamiteReady wrote:Can't give anything close to a critique as detailed as Tin, but that excerpt reminded me of 'The Room' for some reason... Very much so, in fact. Setting and tone. Sombre, mysterious, foreboding, cerebral, lightly menacing...
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