Tempy wrote:Thumbs up for anyone who guesses what the object is.
It went bad is where it went. Horse starts telling a big crowd of people about religion being shit is the short of it. Quite lame really.tigerswiftly wrote:Premise/hook is very nice, Jon. Would definitely like to read more and I'd be interested to know where it went. The tone of the last couple of lines seems quite different, however.
It claimed to know everything and to have made people and animals and even the world probably, but just as an experiment, not because it was God or anything.Aaroncupboard wrote:So what actually was the horse then? I am asking purely out of curiosity as it was intriguing.
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