Stopharage wrote:Tiger, I really enjoyed that. A decent read just needs a bit more dread. Like Tempy says a few lines stick out though; the one about cutting through the house like a scythe seemed a little bit out of place. I thought it was going to end bySpoiler:
Dark Soldier wrote:This is from what I'm attempting now. Trying to write from a female perspective, its pretty much internal monologue conveyed to the reader:There's been no editing, and I've just written as it comes to me my preferred way. Very early first draft, just wondering if it reads okay, and you're convinced it is a woman etcSpoiler:
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